Free Sample College Application Essays

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Viola - Yale - College statement tips

Neche is a junior in Berkeley College majoring in applied mathematics. Her favorite book is Firegirl by Tony Abbott, she listens to a lot of EDM music, and she’s never seen the end of a movie because she always falls asleep in the middle.

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Vikings - Yale - College statement tips

During their senior year of high school, Bri Matusovsky—who uses they/them/their pronouns—received two life-changing surprises in just one day. On that fateful afternoon, Bri sat alone in their apartment when smoke began pouring out of a wall.

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Community - Yale - College personal statement advice

“I was definitely not considering Yale in high school,” says Jacob Hillman, who transferred to Yale in 2017 from Southern Methodist University in Dallas. Jacob grew up in Plano, Texas, and attended a “massive public school” with a graduating class of about fifteen hundred students. Most of his classmates elected to stay in Texas for college.

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Great devotion - Yale - College admissions essay advice

Politics has been a passion since high school for Nick Girard, who views public service as an effective means of becoming truly engaged with his community. Politics has shaped Nick’s trajectory at Yale—he served as vice president of the Yale College Council and president of the College Democrats of Connecticut—and still informs his career choices as he completes his senior year.

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Multicultural - Yale - College admissions essay tips

In high school, Louis DeFelice was first and foremost a dancer. He attended the South Carolina Governor’s School, a public boarding school for the arts, and trained in ballet. There, he also became interested in personal finance; in his senior year, he started reading books about investment to figure out how to handle the leftover money saved up from his dishwashing job.

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The other side - Yale - College admissions essay advice

Born and raised in New Haven, Hacibey (Haci) Catalbasoglu is the city’s youngest ever representative to the Board of Alders—New Haven’s legislative arm. As Ward 1 alder, Haci represents the only all-Yale ward of the city, and works to improve the town-gown relationship between the university and the Elm City.

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Floodgates - Yale - College admissions essay tips

For James Barile, the most challenging aspect of the college application process was having to use the first-person “I” in his essays. “I think I wrote my applications on December 31 [the day before they were due],” he says, laughing, “because I didn’t want to hear about myself and couldn’t fathom that anyone else wanted to.”

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Manifest Destiny - Yale - College admissions essay editing

Applying to Yale University was Jacob Malinowski’s attempt to thwart destiny. Most people from his small town of Greendale, Wisconsin, never stray far from home—and, Jacob says, most are destined to return to his town soon after finishing college to start families of their own.

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